Poem of the week: The Secret Day by Stella Benson

Stella Benson, a writer often overlooked in the annals of literature, has gifted us with 'The Secret Day', a poignant poem that distills the human desire for refuge from an uncertain future. In this carefully crafted verse, Benson creates a sense of urgency and longing, as if the very fabric of time is about to unravel.

With deliberate intent, she constructs 'To-day' – a sanctuary built by her own hands, an artificial haven designed to shield her from life's turmoil. The imagery is vivid: "the foxgloves and the gorse I planted on my way", "the thyme, the velvet thyme, grew up beneath my hands". This deliberate act of creation serves as a coping mechanism, a desperate attempt to impose order on a world that seems to be spinning out of control.

As we delve deeper into the poem, we find a sense of intimacy and vulnerability. Benson trusts her reader with an unflinching account of her innermost thoughts: "So I have built To-day, more precious than a dream; / And I have painted peace upon the sky above". The confessional tone is both powerful and haunting, leaving the reader to ponder the depths of her emotions.

However, some critics may view Benson's use of capitalization for her "Secret Friend" as a trite or childish gesture. This quibble aside, the poem's impact is undeniable. It masterfully employs repetition, with anaphora becoming a tool to emphasize the speaker's resolve: "So I have built To-day... / Lest joy come not again, lest peace return no more, / Lest comfort come no more". The effect is both mesmerizing and humbling.

Ultimately, 'The Secret Day' stands as a testament to Benson's skill as a poet. Her prose may be simple, but it conveys a profound depth of emotion, revealing the human need for solace in times of uncertainty. Despite its limitations, this poem has aged remarkably well, emerging from the shadows of literary history to claim its rightful place alongside other masterpieces.

In its quiet intensity, 'The Secret Day' becomes an elegy for a bygone era – one that speaks directly to our own anxieties and fears about the future. This is a poem that defies time, refusing to be confined by the constraints of space or genre. Its beauty lies in its audacity: it challenges us to confront our own vulnerabilities, to acknowledge the need for refuge in a world that can sometimes feel cruelly capricious.

Stella Benson's 'The Secret Day' is an unsung treasure, a work of quiet power and unassuming brilliance.
 
I'm so blown away by this poem it's like she's speaking straight to my soul 🀩 the way she builds up her sanctuary "to-day" is just so relatable I mean who hasn't felt like they need a escape from the world right now? 😩 and that repetition is like whoa it's like she's hammering home the point about how fragile life can be πŸ’” I love how she just lays it all out there too no sugarcoating or hiding behind fancy language, it's just pure emotion and vulnerability 🌟
 
I love how this poem highlights the human desire to find solace in uncertain times 🌟 It's like Stella Benson is giving us permission to create our own little havens, our own To-days, where we can escape the chaos around us. And I think that's a really powerful message, especially for people who feel overwhelmed by the world's problems.

I also appreciate how she uses repetition in her poem – it's like she's driving home the point that even though life can be tough, we've got to hold on to what brings us comfort and peace 🌿 And I love the image of her building this sanctuary with her own hands – it's so tangible and relatable.

For me, 'The Secret Day' is more than just a poem, it's an invitation to slow down and appreciate the beauty in our own small moments of refuge β˜•οΈ
 
I'm not sure why this poem isn't getting more attention - it's really beautiful 🌟. I love how the writer uses repetition to emphasize her emotions, it's like she's pouring her heart out to the reader. And that "Secret Friend" thing might be a bit cheesy, but it works for me. The imagery is so vivid, I can just imagine myself in this world with the foxgloves and gorse. It's like she's giving us permission to create our own little havens too. What I find really interesting is how this poem speaks to our anxieties about the future - it's like a reminder that we're not alone in feeling scared or uncertain 😬. Overall, I think this poem is definitely worth checking out if you haven't already! πŸ‘
 
I'm loving this new poem by Stella Benson, it's like she's speaking straight to my soul πŸŒ™πŸ’–. I mean, who hasn't felt the urge to create their own little sanctuary in a chaotic world? 🀯 It's so powerful how she uses repetition to drive home her point about holding onto hope and comfort when things seem bleak. The imagery is just stunning too - those foxgloves and gorse are like a beacon of peace amidst all the uncertainty #poetrymatters #stellabenson #thescredyday
 
🀫 I've been digging through some old literary archives and stumbled upon Stella Benson's 'The Secret Day'. Honestly, it's like finding a hidden gem – people tend to overlook her stuff, but trust me, she's got skills πŸ’ͺ. The way she crafts this poem is like watching a masterful puzzle come together. It's all about the vulnerability and intimacy, you can almost feel the weight of her emotions πŸ€—. And yeah, some might say that 'Secret Friend' thing is a bit cheesy, but I think it adds to the raw emotion of the piece ❀️. What really gets me is how she tackles the uncertainty of life – it's like she's speaking directly to our anxieties and fears about the future πŸŒͺ️. Overall, 'The Secret Day' is an underrated masterpiece that deserves more love πŸ’•.
 
I'm so glad I stumbled upon Stella Benson's poem, it's like she wrote it just for me πŸŒΏπŸ’• her use of nature imagery is so soothing, like taking a walk in the woods on a rainy day β˜”οΈ it's amazing how something as simple as planting flowers can feel like a coping mechanism. I love how she trusts the reader with her innermost thoughts, it makes you feel like you're having a private conversation with her 🀫 and that repetition thingy is like music to my ears πŸ’« it just makes me want to scream out "TO-DAY! TO-TODAY!" at the top of my lungs. anywayz, this poem has aged so well, I can see why they say literature is timeless ⏰
 
I love this poem it's like she's creating her own little world to escape from all the craziness of life πŸŒΏπŸ’«. The idea that she's planted flowers and built this "To-day" sanctuary is so peaceful and calming. It's like she's saying "okay, I'm gonna make my own happy place, no matter what happens in the rest of the world". And I think that's something we can all relate to, especially when things get tough πŸ˜”.

I also love how she uses repetition in the poem, it makes you feel like she's on a mission and won't give up πŸš€. It's like "I'm gonna build this To-day, no matter what"! And I think that's what makes the poem so powerful, it's not just about her emotions, it's about how we all need that sense of control and security in our lives.

I don't know if anyone else has mentioned this but I think the poem is kinda like an old-school advice book for life πŸ“š. Like, Stella Benson is saying "hey, life can be tough, but here's what you can do to make it better" and that's something we all need to hear sometimes 😊.
 
I think this poem is like a breath of fresh air 🌱. I mean, who hasn't felt overwhelmed by the world's craziness at some point? Stella Benson's poem is like a little sanctuary we can all visit, you know? It's amazing how she takes these emotions and turns them into something so beautiful and relatable 😊. And yeah, maybe some people might say her use of capitalization for her "Secret Friend" is a bit cheesy, but I think it's kind of genius πŸ€“. The way she repeats those lines over and over again is like music to my ears 🎡. It's like she's saying, "Hey, yeah, life can be tough, but we can create our own little havens, even if they're just in our minds." And that's something we can all get behind πŸ’–.
 
🀯 Stella Benson's "The Secret Day" is like a warm hug for your soul - it's all about finding that little sanctuary in the midst of chaos πŸŒ³πŸ’š. I love how she uses repetition to drive home the urgency of her emotions, it's like you're being screamed at to take care of yourself 😩. The imagery is so vivid, I can almost smell the foxgloves and gorse blooming 🌼. What really gets me is how she's unafraid to be vulnerable and share her innermost thoughts - it's like a breath of fresh air πŸ’¨.

I'm not sure about some critics saying the capitalization for her "Secret Friend" is trite, but I think it adds a certain charm to the poem πŸ€·β€β™€οΈ. The thing that really stands out to me is how this poem speaks directly to our anxieties and fears about the future - it's like Benson is having a conversation with us, saying "Hey, we're all in this together" πŸ—£οΈ.

Anyway, I'm convinced that Stella Benson's work is way underrated, but this poem has definitely made her case for being recognized as one of the greats πŸ’«.
 
OMG, I'm totally obsessed with this poem 🀯! I mean, who knew Stella Benson was like, so ahead of her time? Her writing style is like, super relatable and emotional, you know? I love how she uses repetition to emphasize the speaker's resolve - it's like, totally mesmerizing πŸ”₯. And can we talk about that "Secret Friend" thingy for a sec? πŸ€” Is it really trite or childish, or is it just, like, a clever play on words? I'm kinda torn about it πŸ˜‚.

I also think what I love most about this poem is how it speaks to our collective anxiety and fears about the future. It's like, we're all trying to find that little slice of refuge in a chaotic world, you know? And Stella Benson's 'The Secret Day' just gets it πŸ’–. She's not trying to be all dramatic or anything, she's just being real and vulnerable - which is why it's so powerful 🌟.

Anyway, I'm totally gonna have to read more of her work now... thanks for the rec! πŸ“š
 
omg this poem is literally giving me all the emotions 🀯 i mean i know some ppl might say its simple but like that's exactly what makes it so powerful πŸ™Œ stella benson's use of repetition is genius and it really drives home the sense of urgency in the poem. plus her imagery is so vivid and immersive, i felt like i was right there with her creating this "sanctuary" 🏠 i love how she's not afraid to be vulnerable and share her innermost thoughts with us - it's like she's speaking directly to our souls πŸ’– anyway i'm totally going to go read more of her work now
 
🀩 I think what resonates with me most about this poem is how relatable it feels to be human in the face of uncertainty 😊. It's like we're all just trying to create our own little havens from life's chaos, even if they might not always feel sturdy enough πŸ’ͺ. The way Stella Benson writes about building 'To-day' as a sanctuary, and then trusting us with these deeply personal thoughts... it's really beautiful, but also kinda heartbreaking πŸ€•. I think that's what makes this poem so impactful – it reminds us that we're all in this together, and our emotions are valid πŸ’–.
 
I gotta say πŸ€”, this poem Stella Benson wrote is like something outta a different era - you know, back in my day we didn't have all these fancy literary theories to analyze stuff πŸ“š. To me, it's just a beautiful, honest piece of writing that says a lot about human emotions. I mean, who hasn't felt the need for a safe space or refuge from the world? It's like Benson is speaking straight to your soul πŸ’–.

I love how she uses this "To-day" sanctuary as a metaphor - it's like she's trying to hold onto something that's slipping away from her 🌿. And that repetition with anaphora, man... it's like a heartbeat or something πŸ’₯. It just gets under your skin and stays there.

I'm not gonna lie, I was skeptical at first about this "Secret Friend" business - but yeah, maybe it is a bit cheesy πŸ˜‚. But honestly, who cares? The poem's impact is real, you know? It's like Benson takes all these big feelings and distills them down to the essence. That's what makes 'The Secret Day' so special - it's not trying to be some fancy, showy poem; it just is πŸ’«.

Anyway, I'm glad this poem is getting more recognition πŸ™Œ. We need more writers like Stella Benson who can tap into that deep well of human emotion and share it with the world 🌎.
 
I'm loving this poem, but you know who else needs a safe haven? The average person struggling to make ends meet 🀯. I mean, think about it, they're the ones who need a sense of security and peace in their lives, not just some rich writer. It's like, what's the point of having a "Secret Day" if we can't even afford healthcare or rent? πŸ’Έ We should be building more "To-days" for everyone, not just the privileged few. And by the way, has anyone noticed how this poem is just another example of the wealthy elite telling us what we need to feel better about ourselves? πŸ€”
 
"Life is 10% what happens to you and 90% how you react to it." πŸŒˆπŸ’• It's amazing how Stella Benson's poem 'The Secret Day' can tap into our deepest fears and anxieties about the future, but also offer us a sense of solace and refuge. The way she weaves together themes of creation, vulnerability, and the human need for comfort is truly remarkable. The fact that it has aged so well and is now being rediscovered by readers like us is a testament to her skill as a poet. πŸ“šπŸ’«
 
πŸ™Œ Stella Benson's poem 'The Secret Day' is giving me all the feels πŸ€— I love how she pours her heart out on the page, sharing her own struggles with anxiety and finding solace in creating this little sanctuary called 'To-day'. The imagery is so vivid and relatable - who hasn't felt like they need to escape reality sometimes? πŸ˜‚ And that repetition at the end is EVERYTHING πŸ’– It's like she's speaking directly to your soul, reminding you that you're not alone in feeling vulnerable. I also love how it's not a fancy or overly complicated poem - just pure, unadulterated emotion πŸ’•
 
I just read this poem 'The Secret Day' by Stella Benson and I'm still thinking about it 🀯. It's so cool how the poet creates this 'To-day' sanctuary for herself amidst all the chaos in life. Like, who hasn't felt the need to escape reality sometimes? 🌟 The way she describes building her own little world with foxgloves and gorse is just beautiful πŸ’. And I love how it's like a confessional poem, sharing her deepest feelings with us - it makes you feel all the emotions too 😊. But what I think is really clever is how the poet uses repetition to emphasize the importance of holding onto this sense of peace and comfort in our lives πŸ“š. Overall, I think 'The Secret Day' is like a breath of fresh air - it's so inspiring and makes me want to create my own little refuge too 🌈.
 
😊 I remember reading about Stella Benson like, 5 years ago? πŸ€” Wasn't she some British poet or something? Anyway, just saw this article about her poem "The Secret Day" and I'm still loving it to this day! πŸ™Œ The way she writes about finding solace in a world that's falling apart is so relatable. And that image of planting foxgloves and gorse on her "way" gives me all the feels. 😊 What I love most about poetry is how it can be both simple yet powerful at the same time. Benson's use of repetition really gets to you, doesn't it? πŸ’–
 
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