Harry Styles' upcoming album title Kiss All the Time. Disco, Occasionally has sparked debate over whether the comma usage is correct or not. The main concern lies in the fact that the sentence structure of both sentences differs, with one being an imperative and the other a fragment.
However, grammarians argue that this doesn't necessarily mean Styles made a mistake. Britt Edelen, who wrote about the controversy, notes that while it's not a perfect construction by traditional standards, it does add "kineticism" to the sentence and fits into a larger trend of people trying to convey emotions through commas.
Edelen compares this to writer Virginia Woolf, known for her long, punctuated sentences. He also cites an example from the movie Die My Love, which leaves out a comma where one might be expected.
Furthermore, Ellen Jovin, author and star of the road-trip docu-comedy Rebel With a Clause, points out that disco is not typically used as a verb. The comma, she says, was probably added to render the time of speech graphically.
Jovin also notes that context matters, particularly when it comes to album titles. She believes that ambiguity may be the goal here, rather than trying to impose traditional sentence punctuation on something as creative as an album title.
The visuals of Styles' album title may also play a role in the debate. Unlike physical media or early MP3s, music-streaming apps display song and album titles with artists' preferred styling and punctuation. Artists have played with this ability in recent years, including Billie Eilish's 2017 EP dont smile at me and Dijon's 2024 album Baby.
Ultimately, the importance of grammar lies not just in following rules, but also in clarity. However, when it comes to an album title, ambiguity may be a deliberate choice rather than a mistake.
It's worth noting that stylebooks are fluid and change over time, which is why there is no Official Global Consortium of Correct English. As Jovin says, "I think Americans are overly punctilious punctuators. They tend to pay attention to rules and prohibitions a lot."
The controversy surrounding Styles' album title serves as a reminder that creativity and originality can sometimes be more important than strict grammatical adherence.
However, grammarians argue that this doesn't necessarily mean Styles made a mistake. Britt Edelen, who wrote about the controversy, notes that while it's not a perfect construction by traditional standards, it does add "kineticism" to the sentence and fits into a larger trend of people trying to convey emotions through commas.
Edelen compares this to writer Virginia Woolf, known for her long, punctuated sentences. He also cites an example from the movie Die My Love, which leaves out a comma where one might be expected.
Furthermore, Ellen Jovin, author and star of the road-trip docu-comedy Rebel With a Clause, points out that disco is not typically used as a verb. The comma, she says, was probably added to render the time of speech graphically.
Jovin also notes that context matters, particularly when it comes to album titles. She believes that ambiguity may be the goal here, rather than trying to impose traditional sentence punctuation on something as creative as an album title.
The visuals of Styles' album title may also play a role in the debate. Unlike physical media or early MP3s, music-streaming apps display song and album titles with artists' preferred styling and punctuation. Artists have played with this ability in recent years, including Billie Eilish's 2017 EP dont smile at me and Dijon's 2024 album Baby.
Ultimately, the importance of grammar lies not just in following rules, but also in clarity. However, when it comes to an album title, ambiguity may be a deliberate choice rather than a mistake.
It's worth noting that stylebooks are fluid and change over time, which is why there is no Official Global Consortium of Correct English. As Jovin says, "I think Americans are overly punctilious punctuators. They tend to pay attention to rules and prohibitions a lot."
The controversy surrounding Styles' album title serves as a reminder that creativity and originality can sometimes be more important than strict grammatical adherence.